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05-03-2007, 07:35 AM
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Can you feel pain? Pain means being alive... Long ago I wished to become cold To forget the pain In time, my wish was granted By being cold all the time I would hurt people around me
I couldn’t see their pain I never knew when I lost them
So many times in life to feel empty
Feelings of emptiness worse than pain itself Wishing to become cold Is like sending away the ones who love you It’s still empty insideIf I'm not as cold as back then
Guess I've been dead for a while I voided all the feelings inside And I can never bring them back
I don’t know where I sent them to… I just wish you have someone on your sideWhen you feel pain Just to be there with you Not hurt everyone around you Not be on your own Loneliness only brings around wishes for death...________________________________________________ (I copied the writing style from Silhouette's sig...  )
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There was once a cat that lived one thousand lives And yet it would never die, It would be reborn each time The cat grew tired of its life But still it wouldn't die Then one day the cat met a female cat It fell in love for the first time in 1000 lives For once since a long time, it felt good to be alive Until one day the female cat left him She disappeared from its life Drunk in sadness, the cat laid down And it died a slow death And was never reborn again Last edited by Colourblind : 05-03-2007 at 08:08 AM. 
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05-03-2007, 11:16 AM
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i weeped after reading your poem Colourblind. you have magic in your words. i think it is the first time i read a poem posted by you, in this thread i mean?
and it is... such a well of feelings and emotions. you have magic in your words Colourblind... i know it is the second time i say it, but that is how i feel. your words made my eyes fill with tears. i guess when words flow from experience, they become heavy with true feelings. take care 
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05-03-2007, 11:19 AM
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LiKe A DrEaM ThAt I WiSh To SeE... MaYbE NoT... MaYbE YeS... BuT HaRdLy CaN I InTeRpReT WhAt I CAN SeE... ThEn WhY CaRe AbOuT ThE ReSt? AnD YeT I Do CaRe BeCaUsE It MeAnS SoMeThInG To Me... TrUe ThErE Is NoT MuCh Of It I CaN SeE, BuT Of WhAt I CAN... ThErE Is No DoUbT... ThAt It MeAnS SoMeThInG To Me...
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05-03-2007, 05:10 PM
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Now That You're Leaving
I don't have the power To stop you from leaving But what if I lose you forever? I'll forever stop believing... That there is hope for me Any hope for me to make it through Because, there for me, you will no more be Yes, I would have lost you And all these years you have been The very best friend anyone could be Now that I have learnt what life can mean... You're already leaving me...
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05-04-2007, 11:37 AM
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Huh...well thanks SIA...I never thought I was good at writing stuff...and I don't feel so good for making you weep...Sweet Irresistible Angel...You don't have to thank me Silhouette, it was my pleasure...I'm still waiting for your reply about the dream
 ... That's a really sad poem First End...
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There was once a cat that lived one thousand lives And yet it would never die, It would be reborn each time The cat grew tired of its life But still it wouldn't die Then one day the cat met a female cat It fell in love for the first time in 1000 lives For once since a long time, it felt good to be alive Until one day the female cat left him She disappeared from its life Drunk in sadness, the cat laid down And it died a slow death And was never reborn again Last edited by Colourblind : 05-04-2007 at 11:39 AM.
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05-04-2007, 12:03 PM
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 thank you so much... you tried to redefine my nickname...  that is so nice of you, thanks. well you see, i write poetry myself and weeping was a very good sign... it means, well at least to me, that you have the magic of conveying feelings with your words. that is a precious gift, a gift i wish i had.
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05-04-2007, 12:20 PM
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There was once a cat that lived one thousand lives And yet it would never die, It would be reborn each time The cat grew tired of its life But still it wouldn't die Then one day the cat met a female cat It fell in love for the first time in 1000 lives For once since a long time, it felt good to be alive Until one day the female cat left him She disappeared from its life Drunk in sadness, the cat laid down And it died a slow death And was never reborn again
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